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My name is S. Jae-Jones. I am an editor, a writer, an artist, and an avid skydiver.

The Education of Sumire Min

So, I know it’s already 11 days into November, but is anyone else doing NaNoWriMo? I am cheating, of course, as I’m actually NaNo-ing a project I was already about 35K into by the time November rolled around. (I’m doubly cheating because this is actually the backstory to a villain character in another novel I started writing to avoid working on it.)

Min Sumire was eighteen years old and a woman grown the day an ill wind from the West blew in and rattled the foundations of her new life. Until then she had believed herself impervious to the typhoons and tsunamis of emotional upheaval, but it only took a single blow to her heart to upend everything she held to be true.

These were the truths she held to be unquestionable: that she was smarter than everyone about her, that her beauty was a weapon to be wielded, and that her heart was as cold as ice. She would do anything to serve her own needs ahead of another’s, and she made peace with the knowledge that she was ruthless and beautiful.

But it was all a lie, and it only took was one kiss for her foundations to come crashing down about her ears.

You’ve seen me post drawings/paintings about it. God, I have so many methods of procrastination. Don’t want to write your novel? Write another one! Don’t want to write that? Draw pictures from it instead! Yeesh. I’m also really good at getting in my own way. I started writing this book to get away from relentless research and just write characters making out, but I’m about 42K into it now and THERE IS STILL NO MAKING OUT. Instead I’m writing political scene after political scene after political scene in an attempt to get to the kissing. Also I apparently can’t stop researching; it’s a terrible compulsion! An addiction! I just wanted to write makeouts, dammit!

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4 Responses to The Education of Sumire Min

  1. Michel King 11 Nov 2011 at 12:49 pm #

    It took me about 50K to finally write a love scene because I was a little nervous about it. I mean, how do you write a steamy scene on your first try without it sounding like two fumbling teenagers giggling and knocking teeth? I am nano-ing too and haven’t gotten more than 500 words into that one. Procrastinators unite!

  2. Ileandra Young 11 Nov 2011 at 12:49 pm #

    Lol, I still don’t know if there’s going to be any making out in my NaNo. I feel like there should be but I’d end up forcing it. There will be plenty of flying and swooping and fancy hand gestures which conjure powerful magic spells and the like. Pixies can be awesome that way. :D

  3. Kristan 11 Nov 2011 at 1:49 pm #

    LOL about the lack of make outs in your make out story. I really like this snippet that you’ve posted though. I would totally read that book. There’s something about characters who don’t apologize for their flaws that I absolutely adore. (Perhaps because I apologize too often for mine.)

    • JJ 11 Nov 2011 at 1:56 pm #

      Well, she does become the villain of the novel I abandoned revising to work on this so… ;-)

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