This past weekend was lovely and actually somewhat productive. Bear took me to school while he studied with his friends and I sat off to the side revising Elijah’s Chariot. The Kitchen Girls had told me that a certain scene in the second act just wasn’t working and after struggling with it for weeks, I came to the epiphany (late as usual), that they were right and cut it. There was no need to show the scene; other characters can reminisce about it later. The important part is the consequences of said scene, not the scene itself. Natch. [...]
It’s A Beautiful Day
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